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I dislike the way that in every picture, there is a dead body, and some guy doing the "Yeah, I killed him, but I'm pretending to be that gritty action hero character that doesn't care, so watch me casually walk away." It might look okay if one of them were like that, just not when all of them are like that. The lighting coupled with the fog in the first screnshot makes it look strange and tacky mabye some different scenery would make it look better. In the second screnshot people are all huddled around the bomb like it's their newborn child or something, which makes little sense and those people must have been standing pretty close to the C4 before death. Mabye try scattering the bodies out. With the last screenshot, I had to re-look a few times before I noticed that the guy pointing was supposed to be the Detective. Other than that, the posing is pretty good, and it was a nice idea. But they could have been better if you were a little more creative with some of your screenshots. I would have liked to have seen something in action also, instead of the after action.
I wish I didn't have to type so much really long sentences, because now my paragraph looks stupid, so I'm adding the second one to make be feel better.
I feel bad about quoting this entire thing :/ . But, These took me a maximum of 30 minutes (Most of that time was just finding out what spot of the map i liked best), if i really wanted to, i couldve been a lot better, Also, i dont see how someone has the "Yeah i killed im" look in the detective one, the traitor is simpley running away. (He looks strange because originaly he had a Mac10 but looked like he was peeing because you couldnt see his gun :/ ) And theres a dead body in all of them because in the game people die (Herp-De-Derp!) Also they werent close to the C4 on death, the traitor couldve moved them there (Because people tend to try to identify bodies and ignore the beeps (Ive done this before, it has worked, and after it worked, i lol'd.